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Sakefully Quick by ~idtb:iconidtb:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


Oh, holy one
I kneel before you
For my life is done
What am I to do?

I've sat and prayed
My impatience grew
Waiting for aid
Which was way overdue

My hope was left to fade
Time has passed

I'm reaching for the blade
For my sake, please act fast
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11-06-03, Saturday Evening
©2003-2008 ~idtb
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I'm no good at descriptions.. It has a religious twist, but so do I.

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~dead2me:icondead2me: Dec 8, 2003, 4:33:08 AM
nice write steve! i love the word choices.

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I'm allergic to drama.
~bled-for-you:iconbled-for-you: Dec 8, 2003, 4:48:48 AM
Mmm...Wonderful. I like the feeling in it. =)

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Wish you were here...
~juliev6:iconjuliev6: Dec 9, 2003, 5:56:47 PM
so sad, but amazing poem. The rhyming is great, flows perfectly.

Take it easy -JV

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smile for me
~psycho-loser-kid:iconpsycho-loser-kid: Dec 9, 2003, 6:05:36 PM
I concur with everyone else. This peom roxxorz.

+fav ;P
*otiose:iconotiose: May 8, 2004, 5:18:45 PM
Don't rely on invisible and unreliable people.
~elenrandir:iconelenrandir: Jul 11, 2004, 9:49:39 AM
nice
the ending gave me shivers
*salembaby:iconsalembaby: Apr 29, 2005, 11:17:45 PM
i love this so much. it seems to have so much feeling in it.

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Stirb nicht vor mir
~satanicsnowman:iconsatanicsnowman: Oct 31, 2005, 6:02:36 AM
nice poem
btw i am changing to a new account my user name is smokinmonkey so if your not to busy you can add that name to your friend list
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